题目内容
【题目】书面表达
同学们,中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了,班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计划。假如你是李华,请根据以下内容提示用英语向同学们汇报一下你的计划。
内容提示:
暑假计划 | |
学习 | 博览群书;学习技能 (或自拟一点) |
生活 | 健康饮食;坚持锻炼 (或自拟一点) |
其它 | 热爱公益;亲近自然 (或自拟一点) |
注意:
1. 表达中必须包括所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear classmates,
Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.
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I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】Dear classmates,
Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.
First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it's necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I'm interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.
Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.
Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.
I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That's all. Thank you.
【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如I'd like to do,help me open my mind,at least,be interested in,during the holiday,plan to do,join in,be kind to someone in need,pay more attention to,be close to nature,search the Internet等。而First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need.等表顺序词和综合句式的运用,既使短文层次清晰,又丰富了习作内容,使表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。