Question

【题目】我们的生活中处处充满着爱，有父母的爱，有老师的爱，有同学的爱，有朋友的爱……请以“Love Around Me（我身边的爱）”为题，写一篇短文。内容要点如下：

爱你的人	爱的表现
父母	为你做早餐；送你上学……
老师	传授知识；照顾你……
同学	一起学习；和睦相处……
朋友	在网上交流；分享快乐与烦恼……

写作要求：1. 根据表格提示父母的爱、老师的爱、同学的爱和朋友的爱都要写齐。

2. 词数90词左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名

参考词汇： receive love； get on ...with； chat online;

There is lots of love around me in my everyday life.

Answer 1

【答案】Love Around Me

There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. Every day I can receive love from my parents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends. In the morning, my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge. My dear classmates and I study together happily, getting on well with each other. I chat online with friends in my spare time. They often share my pleasure and trouble. I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. I make a decision to study hard and make great progress. Here, I should say to them, “Thank you for all your love.”

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以“Love Around Me（我身边的爱）”为题，写一篇短文。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：There is……., Every day I can……, my lovely mother cooks……, I chat online with……, I make a decision to……, I should…….等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。