Question

8．这次考试结束以后，你将怎样度过一个有意义的暑假，请用英语写一篇文章给你自己和小伙伴们一些好的建议，内容必须包括以下要点：
①走亲访友，和家人一起共度美好时光．②和好朋友们一起看电影，听音乐…
③假期我们应该加强体育锻炼，增强体质．④你还有什么别的建议（至少两条）．
要求：
1．字数80-100，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥．
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名．
3．行文连贯，条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范．
4．标题和开头已给出，不计入总字数．
How to Take a Meaningful Summer Vacation after the Exam
It is necessary to take a meaningful summer vacation after the exam．There are kinds of activities for us to take part in．
                         

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Second，seeing a film，listening to music or hanging out with our friends will be also wonderful．第二，看电影，听音乐和朋友闲逛将会是非常美妙．动词短语作主语时，要用其ing形式，hang out with…，和…闲逛．
高分句型二：What's more，we had better review what we have learned in middle school．更重要的是，我们最好复习一下我们在中学学过的东西．what's more，更重要的，递进关系，had better do sth．最好做某事，表示建议；review后面接的是一个宾语从句，疑问词what 提前．
高分句型三：Finally，it is necessary for us to do some housework，which can help our parents a lot．最后，做一些家务对我们而言是有必要的，它能给我们的父母帮很多忙．（该句是一个非限定性定语从句，which can help our parents a lot 是一个定语来修饰housework．句型It is+adj．for sb．to do sth．做某事是…，句型中It 作形式主语，真正的主语为动词不定式．）

解答 How to Take a Meaningful Summer Vacation after the Exam
    It is necessay to take a meaningful summer vacation after the exam．There are kinds of activities for us to take part in．
    First，we can visit our friends and relatives or spend happy time with our family．Second，seeing a film，listening to music or hanging out with our friends will be also wonderful．（高分句型一）Third，we should take more exercise to keep healthy．What's more，we had better review what we have learned in middle school．（高分句型二） Finally，it is necessary for us to do some housework，which can help our parents a lot．（高分句型三）（分别按顺序列举可以参加的活动）
   Above all，I hope all of us can have a pleasant vacation．（最后作总结）

点评 考生在写作时需明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，考生在平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．