题目内容
书面表达（满分10分）
你班上周举行了”影响我最多的人”的主题班会,每位同学各抒己见,李明同学介绍了影响他最多的人是2011年感动中国十大人物之一的”刘伟” 。请根据表中李明同学发言的纪录,以他的口吻用英文写一篇短文。
基本信息 | 1、刘伟, 北京人, 1987年出生。 2、10岁时,因为事故失去了双臂,但他没有失去信心。 |
事例 | 1、他喜欢游泳,14岁时,他获得了全国残疾人游泳竞标赛(the national championship for the disabled)金牌。 2、19岁时,自学钢琴,每天花7个小时用脚练习弹钢琴。 |
成就和看法 | 1、通过艰苦的努力,他的梦想在中国达人秀（China’s Got Talent）的舞台上实现了。 2、因此,我认为………。(发挥一到两句) |
注意：
1、必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2、第6点必须用1-2句话适当发挥；
3、词数90个左右,文章开头已经给出,不计入总次数。
The person who has influenced me most
Liu Wei is the person who has influenced me most. ________________________________________________________________________
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The person who has influenced me most
Liu Wei is the person who has influenced me most. Liu Wei was born in Beijing in 1987. When he was only ten, he lost both arms because of an accident. However he didn’t lose heart. He was fond of swimming and at the age of 14, he got a gold medal at the national championship for the disabled. At the age of 19, he started to learn to play the piano and spent 7 hours practicing playing the piano with his feet. Through hard work, he made many achievements. His dream came true on the stage of China’s Got Talent in the end. Liu Wei is the person who I admire. His success proved that “Where there is a will , there is a way.”
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇介绍影响小作者最多的人是2011年感动中国十大人物之一的”刘伟” 。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如When he was only ten, he lost both arms because of an accident. However he didn’t lose heart. He was fond of swimming and at the age of 14, he got a gold medal at the national championship for the disabled.
考点：提纲类作文。
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