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【题目】书面表达

根据问题提示写一篇文章,介绍一下你和你的朋友,不低于80个单词。

1. What do you think of friends?

2. Who is your best friend?

3. What does he/she look like?

4. What are your differences?

My Friend And I

【答案】

My Friend And I

Friends are very important for me .They make my life more colorful.

My name is Jeff. My best friend is John. He is taller than I, but I am stronger than him. We often play together. He often helps me because he studies better than me. We often spend time together .We discuss our lessons and our favorite pop stars .When I'm in trouble, I turn to my friends for help. They give me some good advice

I like to have friends who are different from me .My best friend John is taller and more outgoing than me. We both like sports ,but John is more athletic(活力)than me. and I'm a little quieter .With his help ,I know more things and people than before. When I'm sad, he always makes me laugh.

How nice it is to have such friends! I like my friends!

【解析】

试题分析:这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息,来介绍一下自己的朋友。题目以问句的方式给出了提示。这些问题包括了你对朋友的看法;谁是你的好朋友;他她的长相以及与你的不同之处等。写作时,我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排,使文章的意思衔接更自然。而且关于介绍人物时所使用的词汇和句型,最好用比较熟悉的,所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词,使文章上下文意思连贯,更出彩。

写作亮点:这是一篇非常优秀的作文,短文中作者按照题目的要求,给我们介绍了自己的朋友John,结构清晰,要点全面。而且作者在写作时,并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序,逐句翻译的,而是将这些信息进行了整合,让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达,这一点很好。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范,而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式,增强了文章的连贯性。如动词不定式I turn to my friends for help.、形容词比较级句式He is taller than I, but I am stronger than him.、介词短语When I'm in trouble、连词My best friend John is taller and more outgoing than me.等。

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【题目】Going to a friend’s house is very exciting. You may spend time with a friend and get to see where he lives. So remember to be polite.

When to arrive

The first thing to remember is that when a friend invites you to his/her house, you need to arrive on time. If your friend tells you to come “around 3:00”, that means you can arrive a few minutes after 3:00, but it is also a good idea to arrive at the right time.

What to bring

Often it is also nice to bring something to your friend’s house. This could be a box of chocolates for you two to share(分享), or maybe a movie that you can watch together. You can also bring some flowers. A little gift is a nice way to show your friend that you are excited to be at his house.

How to greet (问候)

When you visit your friend’s house, you may also meet his parents. You should tell them who you are and they may tell you their names. As a child, I went to visit my friend Paul. I called his parents by their first names John and Mary. But now I know it is more polite to call them Mr or Mrs Smith. This will show them more respect(尊重).

It is a cool thing to visit a friend’s house. Be polite to your friend’s parents, and you will be invited again!

1 If your friend asks you to get to your friend’s house around 5:00 p.m, it is polite to arrive at ________ p.m.

A. 4:30 B. 4:50 C. 5:02 D. 5:30

2The passage mainly(主要)tells us ____________.

A. when to arrive at your friend’s house

B. how to greet people

C. what to bring to your friend

D. how to be a good visitor

3 It’s not good to bring your friend ____________ when you go to his/her house.

A. a box of chocolates B. some flowers

C. a movie D. some money

4The passage may be from ____________.

A. a notice(通知) on a wall

B. a letter to a friend

C. an article in a magazine

D. a piece of news in a newspaper

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