Question

【题目】提示：你喜欢什么动物?为什么?它有哪些特点?请以I like…为题，写一篇60词左右的短文描述你喜欢的动物。可适当发挥。

要求：语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；如果

使用学校，请用Guangming Middle School。

Answer 1

【答案】I like Dog

Dog is my favorite animal.The reason why I like it most is because it's very competent.Dog is the best friend for mankind.It is also the best companion for the old people.The dog can feel the human nature.So many old people will raise dogs if their children are not with them.The old can give their love for their children to the dog to make themselves feel warm.I believe the seeing eye dog is very famous.They are special dogs.Those dogs will guide their owners whose eyes is blind to go the correct way.See,I say dogs are very competent.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要用第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述，注意主谓一致问题。注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。