题目内容
【题目】作文
假如你和几个同学上个星期天外出爬山.请你根据下面的提示写一篇日记,记下这次愉快的周末郊游.
提示:1、天气晴朗,爬山很开心;
2、在山顶欣赏美景(beautiful scenery)、拍照;
3、中午在山脚下野餐、在山谷里玩游戏(in the valley);
4、美丽风光让我们流连忘返(enjoy oneself so as to forget to leave).
注意: 1、词数80左右(开头和结尾都已给出,不计入总数);
2、短文条理清晰,不可直接全文照搬提示,可适当发挥;
Sunday,September 1st,2017.Clear.
I had a trip with several of my friends last Sunday.
We had a great time.It was a pleasant trip.
【答案】Sunday,September 1st,2017.Clear.
I had a trip with several of my friends last Sunday.
It was fine.The sun was shining warmly.We were happy to climb up to the hill. The blue sky,white clouds,fresh air,green hills,beautiful flowers,quiet forests,singing birds and flying insects made a beautiful picture at West Hill.We were busy enjoying the beautiful scenery and taking photos on the top of West Hill.At noon,we had a picnic lunch at the foot of West Hill.Then we played games in the valley. Beautiful scenery at West Hill made us enjoy ourselves so much as to forget to leave.
We had a great time at West Hill.We were tired but happy.It was a pleasant trip.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文,写一篇日记,介绍我和几个同学上个星期天,外出爬山的这次郊游。
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般过去时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:We were happy to…….,we had……,Then we played……,It was……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。