Question

【题目】Writing （作文）

Write at least 60 words on the topic “ ， a place I have visited”(以“ ， 我参观的一个地方”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

暑假即将来临，我们不少学生准备出去游学、参观。你能否能把自己参观过的一个地方（village/town/beach/museum/city/country...）推荐给你的同学？请说明推荐理由并提出一些建议。

Answer 1

【答案】例文

The Great Wall, a place I have visited

I have been to the Great Wall last summer holiday. I went there by bus with my parents. The bus was very fast, but I still felt it slow. When we got there, it was 12 o’clock. When we got the foot of BaDaling Mountain, I couldn't help to climbing.

"The Great Wall was the longest wall in the world, and we are very proud of it..." After listening to the guide, I climbed and climbed, when I felt tired, I always thought about the people who made the Great wall, and then I felt energetic.My hard working was paid off in the end! Just like a saying goes "The man who hasn’t been to the Great Wall is not a real man!" I was excited and shouted that "I am a true man!"

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时注意题目要求，要推荐给朋友并给出自己的建议。