Question

【题目】在八年级上学期即将结束之际，八(1)班将举行一次主题班会，要求同学们谈谈这一学期自己的收获与变化。请为David准备一份80词左右的演讲稿，具体内容如下：

	过去	现在
学习	很少阅读，花时间在……	读书使我放松……
环保	浪费水电，随处乱抛垃圾	意识到环保的重要性，垃圾入桶
礼仪	大声喧哗，插队推挤	举止礼貌，主动让座
爱心	不知道如何关心他人	……
展望未来	相信自己在将来会越来越棒。

Hello, everyone. I'm David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last term, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.……
Thanks for listening!

Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everyone. I'm David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last term, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.
First, in the past I seldom read books. I used to spend most of my time playing computer games. Now I find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to me.
Second, I always forgot to turn off the tap and the power when they were not in use. Sometimes I left the tap running after I washed my hands. I always dropped litter carelessly in the park. But now I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I always throw the litter into the rubbish bins.
Third, I was impolite before. I sometimes shouted loudly or pushed in before others in public places. Now, I can behave politely in public and I often give my seat to someone in need on the bus.
Fourth, I cared little about others. But now I offer to help my blind neighbors and donate all my pocket money to Project Hope.
I'm sure I will do better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for listening!
【解析】提纲作文要求学生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言老表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言的表达能力。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。