Question

【题目】你是学生会主席。本周六学校将组织学生参观自然博物馆。请你以学生会的名义写一份通知，内容如下:

1.集合时间、地点:上午9点，学校操场

2.时间安排:乘大巴车前往；参观2小时；12点左右回到学校

3.活动内容:了解一些野生动物的情况，参观活动后将讨论最喜爱的动物，并写一篇参观日记。

4.注意事项:遵守博物馆参观须知(至少写出3项)；注意保管好个人物品；记住车号，按时返回

1.集合时间、地点:上午9点，学校操场

2.时间安排:乘大巴车前往；参观2小时；12点左右回到学校

3.活动内容:了解一些野生动物的情况，参观活动后将讨论最喜爱的动物，并写一篇参观日记。

4.注意事项:遵守博物馆参观须知(至少写出3项)；注意保管好个人物品；记住车号，按时返回

要求: 1.词数80个左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2.用上表格内所有的内容提示, 自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

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Our school will organize a trip to the Nature Museum this Saturday.

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Students’ Union

Answer 1

【答案】请参考范文：

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Our school will organize a trip to the Nature Museum this Saturday.And we will meet on the school playground at 9 o'clock in the morning.

The Nature Museum is full of all kinds of wild animals,and we will have a whole day there.In the morning,students can visit the Nature Museum themselves.Then,there will be a nice lunch.In the afternoon,we will go on a group tour to learn about some wild animals.After visiting the Nature Museum,we can discuss our favorite animals together.Finally,we need to write a visiting diary.

It is important that all of us should observe the museum visiting instructions and take care of our personal belongings.

Please remember the number and return on time.

Have a great day ！

Students’ Union

【解析】

本题提供一篇范文供参考。

请参考范文：

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Our school will organize a trip to the Nature Museum this saturday.And we will meet on the school playground at 9 o'clock in the morning.

The Nature Museum is full of all kinds of wild animals,and we will have a whole day there.In the morning,students can visit the Nature Museum themselves.Then,there will be a nice lunch.In the afternoon,we will go on a group tour to learn about some wild animals.After visiting the Nature Museum,we can discuss our favorite animals together.Finally,we need to write a visiting diary.

It is important that all of us should observe the museum visiting instructions and take care of our personal belongings.

Please remember the number and return on time.

Have a great day ！

Students’ Union

范文中的高分点主要有：（1）善用连词，如And then,Finally等；（2）思维逻辑，行为需富于层次感，如文中的上午，中午，下午，分别用In the morning，In the afternoon；（3）特殊的带有强调意味的句子的使用，如：It is important that all of us should observe the museum visiting instructions and take care of our personal belongings.使用的结构是It is important that.....后面接的是完整的一个句子。