题目内容

假如你是李华,就个人爱好带来的困惑给英国朋友Stephen发电子邮件进行交流并请求帮助。

要点:

 

李华

 

爱好

对太空旅行感兴趣;经常到图书馆阅读资料

困惑

得不到老师理解

观点

1.个人爱好有助于学习;

2. ……(至少一点)

老师

观点

时间应花在功课上;成绩就是一切

要 求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;

2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;

3)词数:100词左右(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);

4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

Dear Stephen,

I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.

____________________________________________________

_______________________________________

____________________

What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes

Li Hua

 

Dear Stephen

I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.

You know I am crazy about space travel. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. This makes my teacher very angry. To him, good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends.

I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby, it will be of great value to my future development. But I don’t think my teacher understands me . I feel bad about that .

What shall I do ? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.

Besth wishes

LiHua

【解析】

试题分析:考查提纲类书面表达:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文出现一些常见的短语am crazy about对。。感到疯狂; spend more time on 在。。花费时间;are helpful for对。。有益; offer me some suggestions提供某人建议; looking forward to盼望着;This makes my teacher very angry.这让我的老师很生气,angry做宾语补足语。If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby, it will be of great value to my future development.如果我能平衡功课与作业,它将对我的将来发展很有好处, be of 不可数名词等于be +adj .

考点: 提纲类作文

 

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