题目内容
7.本周的主题班会是谈谈如何成为一个好孩子How to be a good child,请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文..要点:
1.作为一个好孩子,应该学会帮助别人.
2. 在家里,我们应该主动帮助父母干家务,如扫地,倒垃圾等.
3.在学校,我们应该努力学习,尊敬老师.与同学友好想处,多参加体育活动.
4.有很多需要的人,如去敬老院帮助老人,去医院看望生病的孩子等.
5. 实际上,帮助别人就是帮助自己.
要求:1.词数80词左右.2.适当发挥,行文连贯.,
参考词汇:尊敬 respect 与谁友好相处 get on well with
陷入麻烦中get in trouble 同学 classmates
.
分析 高分句型一
If you ask me how to be a good child,I'll make a quick answer. 如果你问我如何做一个好孩子,我会很快回答你.这是if引导的条件状语从句,主句是一般将来时,从句用的是一般现在时.
高分句型二
we should help people who need help.我们应该帮助需要帮助的人.who need help是一个定语从句,修饰先行people.
解答 If you ask me how to be a good child,I'll make a quick answer【高分句型一,注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】,"There are many ways to be a good child.【开篇点明主题】"First,as a good child,you should learn to help others【高分句型二,注意instead of的使用】.Second,we should help parents do housework at home,such as sweeping,taking out the trash and so on.Third,we should study hard at school and respect teachers,we should also get on well with classmates and take more exercise.Fourth,we should help people who need help【高分句型二,注意定语从句的使用】,we can go to the nursing home to help the old or visit the sick children in the hospital,in fact,to help others is to help themselves【正文部分详细介绍如何成为一个好孩子】.Do you want to be a good child?Let's get moving!【结尾紧扣主题】
点评 动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲,写出关键单词.写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but,so,then等.