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【题目】短文写作

共享单车(bike-sharing)被誉为中国现代新四大发明之一。如今厦门的大街小巷也随处可见共享单车的身影。请你根据表格内容，简要介绍共享单车的发展及使用方法，并表达一下你自己对共享单车的看法。

Development	First used in Holland,1965
	introduced in China in 2007
	been popular since 2016
Instruction	scan the QR code(二维码)
	unlock the smart lock
	pay the bill
Opinion	healthy,...
	blocking(堵塞) the way,...

要求：

1.必须包含所提示信息，字数100词左右；

2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名及提示信息之外的地名。

提示词：shared bikes 共享的自行车

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Answer 1

【答案】With the development of the economy, shared bikes are seen everywhere. It was first used in Holland in 1965. It was introduced in China in 2007 and it has been popular since 2016.How can we use the shared bikes? Firstly, we need to scan the QR code if we want to use them.Secondly, when we get to our destination, we should unlock the smart lock. Finally, we need to pay the bill.

Different people have different opinions about shared bikes. Some people believe that riding shared bikes is healthy. It can build up our body. However, others argues that it blocks the way. In my opinion, it is good to ride shared bikes, because it is good for our health. What’s more, we can enjoy beautiful scenery. Nevertheless, we should use them properly.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据表格中所给出的内容，简要介绍共享单车的发展及使用方法，并表达一下你自己对共享单车的看法。文章时态主要用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称主要是第一、第三人称。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。