Question

18．假如你是Mary，初中学习生活即将结束，请向你的老师（Mr．White）致谢，感谢他对你一直以来的教育、关心和帮助，并祝福老师健康快乐．
Dear Mr．White，
                                                                                                                                                                                                           


Yours，
Mary．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①When I②had trouble in life，you③told me to be brave．
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②have trouble in  在某方面有困难
③tell sb to do sth 让某人做某事
【高分句型二】
①Because of your help，many students，including me，are ②more and more ③interested in English and④make much progress，too．
①because of因为…，后加名词代词或动名词．
②比较级+and+比较级 越来越…
③be interested in 对…感兴趣
④make progress取得进步

解答 Dear Mr White，
     Leaving you-lovely junior school life，I have so many words from my heart to say．
     Since you became my English teacher three years ago，you've always been working hard．（工作努力，认真）I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are（教学耐心，待人友好）．You're strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly（严格要求也关爱学生）．All my classmates agree that we get on well with each other for these years．（师生相处和睦）I still remember when I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．【高分句型一】（给予学习上和生活上的帮助）
     Because of your help，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．【高分句型二】（学生学业取得了进步）You have given me so much．
Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best wishes to you!（祝福）
Yours，
Mary．

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