题目内容
书面表达(10分)
假设你是Susan,最近你为下面提示中的事感到苦恼。请你写一封信向你的好朋友Jack寻求建议。
提示:你有一个很好的朋友Linda,以前是个刻苦用功的女孩。可最近她变了,她花大把的时间打游戏、逛街,有时还欺骗父母多给她钱买书,实际上她一本书都没买,全都花在衣服上了,成绩也一落千丈。你劝过她很多回,可她不听,还说如果你将此事告诉她父母,你就不是她的朋友。
要求:
(l)条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确;
(2) 80个单词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
I am writing to you for advice about my good friend Linda.
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Yours,
Susan
Dear Jack,
I am writing to you for advice about my good friend Linda.
Linda was once a hard-working girl. But recently, she has changed a lot. She isn't a hard-working girl any more. Instead, she spends a lot of time and money on games and clothes. She failed the tests many times. Last weekend, she even cheated her parents. She asked her parents for money to buy books but she spent all of the money on some fashionable clothes. I talked with her but she said it was none of my business. And she said that if I told her parents about that, she wouldn’t be my friend any longer. What should I do?
Yours,
Susan
【解析】
试题分析:这篇短文要求我们写一封信向好朋友Jack寻求建议。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作内容,主要包括:一、讲述事情经过:你有一个很好的朋友Linda,以前是个刻苦用功的女孩。可最近她变了,她花大把的时间打游戏、逛街,有时还欺骗父母多给她钱买书,实际上她一本书都没买,全都花在衣服上了,成绩也一落千丈。你劝过她很多回,可她不听,还说如果你将此事告诉她父母,你就不是她的朋友。二、向朋友Jack寻求建议。主要内容虽然已经给出,但是很多其他内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理,内容丰富,这就需要花费我们的想象力,以及我们平时积累的知识。另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据题目要求,讲述了事情的经过并说明了写信的目的是寻求Jack的建议。层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如What should I do?等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要,意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型,如She isn't a hard-working girl any more. Instead, she spends a lot of time and money on games and clothes.等。
考点:提纲类作文。