Question

18．回顾三年的初中生活，父母的教诲与支持始终伴你成长，使你进步．那些发生在你与父母之间的故事，看似平淡却值得回味与珍藏．请以"The story of My Progress"为题，写一篇文章．
要求：1．讲述一件发生在你与父母之间的事情，可适度发挥．
2．词数80左右，文中不得出现真实的姓名与学校名称．
The Story of My Progress
My progress has connected with my mother．（开篇点题）
Three years ago，I was a shy girl．I was afraid to speak in public．My mother was worried about that．One day，my mother heard that a speech competition would be held in my school．【高分句型一】she encouraged me to take part in the activity．At first，I was shocked by her advice，but I did not want to let her down，so I agreed．During that period，my mother often took me to the park to practice． I still remembered that day clearly．When I won the first prize，my mother smiled happily．【高分句型二】（回忆过去的事情）
Now I am an outgoing and confident girl．Thanks to my mother's encouragement and company，I have made such great progress．（感谢妈妈）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
One day，my mother heard that a speech competition would be held in my school．
句中"that a speech competition would be held in my school"为宾语从句，这句话意为：有一天，我的妈妈听说一场演讲比赛将会在我们学校举办．
高分句型二：
When I won the first prize，my mother smiled happily．
句中"When I won the first prize"为时间状语从句，这句话意为：当我获奖的时候，我的妈妈开心地笑了．

解答 The Story of My Progress
My progress has connected with my mother．（开篇点题）
Three years ago，I was a shy girl．I was afraid to speak in public．My mother was worried about that．One day，my mother heard that a speech competition would be held in my school．【高分句型一】she encouraged me to take part in the activity．At first，I was shocked by her advice，but I did not want to let her down，so I agreed．During that period，my mother often took me to the park to practice． I still remembered that day clearly．When I won the first prize，my mother smiled happily．【高分句型二】（回忆过去的事情）
Now I am an outgoing and confident girl．Thanks to my mother's encouragement and company，I have made such great progress．（感谢妈妈）

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