Question

【题目】同学们，中考过后，你们即将告别亲爱的母校。回首三年的母校生活，学校里的很多规则 有助于你的健康成长。你能谈一谈你们学校的校规吗？你对这些校规有何看法？你对母校有 哪些合理化建议？请你以My school rules为题写一篇短文。

要求：1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；

2. 书写工整、规范；

3. 根据所给内容，请做适当发挥；

4. 词数80左右。文章的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

My school rules

We have many rules in our school.

Answer 1

【答案】My school rules

We have many rules in our school. I think most of them are good for us, but some are not so good.

Here are some good rules. We can’t be late for school. We must listen carefully to teachers in class. Mobile phones are not allowed to bring into the school. These rules are good for our study and I like them.

I think there are also a few unnecessary rules. For example, students are not allowed to wear long hair. I think girls should be allowed to wear long hair. I hope these rules can be changed.

【解析】本文谈一谈对母校校规的看法，提出一些合理性的建议。所以句子的主语应该用第一人称，句子的时态用一般现在时，所写的句子应该用一些高级词汇及句式，不要写汉语式的英语。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：be good for有益；be allowed to do sth被允许做某事；I think most of them are good for us, but some are not so good.I think there are also a few unnecessary rules.I think girls should be allowed to wear long hair. I hope these rules can be changed.用了that引导的宾语从句，是亮点句。