Question

【题目】书面表达

现在中学生普遍觉得压力很大，有的不能很好地处理人际关系，有的害怕考试。你一定也有过压力吧？你的压力是什么？ 你是怎样处理压力的？请就此问题用英语写一篇短文，与同学们分享。词数在90左右。

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates and teachers, while others may worry about the exams. I used to be under too much pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in our class and they made me study all day. I had a long talk with my parents. I told them that I had done my best and that what they were doing was stressing me. Finally, they understood me. Now, they don’t put pressure on me any more.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇话题作文，让学生用英语写一篇短文说说你的压力是什么？ 你是怎样处理压力的。本文给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是适当发挥想象用正确的英语说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真思考该写哪些要点。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：该文语句通顺，表达了作者的。短文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩如： I used to be under too much pressure, too. I told them that I had done my best and that what they were doing was stressing me.等等。