Question

15．越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大地危害．作为中学生，我们应该怎么做呢？请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇有关交通安全的短文（80词左右）．
提示：1．遵守交通规则，如走人行道、过斑马线 （crosswalk）．
2．别在街道上或马路上玩耍．
3．劝父母不能酒后驾车．
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With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life．But unluckily，it has also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents．
Traffic safety is everybody's business．We must obey the rules．For example，we must walk on sidewalk．When we cross crosswalk，stop and look both ways，then go across fast．Don't play on the road，we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and laugh while driving etc．
It's good that cars are coming into our life．But when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business，we can be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是针对交通安全说说看法和建议．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．遵守交通规则，如走人行道、过斑马线 （crosswalk）．
2．别在街道上或马路上玩耍．
3．劝父母不能酒后驾车．
常用到的重点短语：
obey rules 遵守规则
tell sb not to do sth 让某人不要做某事
go across 穿过
【高分句型】
1．①With ②more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy③that it has greatly improved our life．
①with短语表伴随．
②比较级+and+比较级，越来越…
③that引导的宾语从句．
2．When we cross crosswalk，stop and look both ways，then go across fast．
when引导的时间状语从句．

解答 With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life．【高分句型】But unluckily，it has also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents．（总述，引出下文）
Traffic safety is everybody's business．We must obey the rules．For example，we must walk on sidewalk．When we cross crosswalk，stop and look both ways，then go across fast．【高分句型】（遵守交通规则，如走人行道、过斑马线）Don't play on the road，（别在街道上或马路上玩耍）we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and laugh while driving etc．（劝父母不能酒后驾车）
It's good that cars are coming into our life．But when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business，we can be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．

点评 提纲作文是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型．主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力．为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要读得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文．此外，还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法．其实，用英文写信，记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法．