Question

5．假如你是育英中学的刘琳，在网上看到一美国中学生Anna想结交中国朋友的 帖子，请你给她回帖，表示愿意成为她的朋友．
内容包括介绍自己．（不超过三项）
1．为什么想和她成为朋友．
要求写作中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称．
2．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范．
3．文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
4．词数：60〜80词．
Hi Anna，
I'm Liu Lin
I'm a student of Yuying Middle School in China．I'm kind of outgoing and good at swimming．I'd like to be your friend．Because of the same age，I think we can learn well from each other and help each other．It's also a good way for us to talk both in English and Chinese，right？And I think we can know a lot about your and my country and people．Is that what you expect？
Best wishes！
Yours，
Liu Lin．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是给Anna回帖，表示愿意成为她的朋友．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1介绍自己
2为什么想和她成为朋友
常用到的重点短语：
kind of 一点儿
be good at 擅长…
because of 因为…
learn from sb 向某人学习
each other彼此
both …and…两者都…
高分句型：
1．①Because of the same age，I think ②we can learn well from each other and help each other．
①because of表示因为…，of是介词，后加名词代词或动名词．
②省略了that的宾语从句，作为think的宾语．
2．①It's also a good way for us to talk ②both in English and Chinese，③right？
①it作为形式主语，后面的动词不定式是真正主语．
②both …and…两者都…连接名词或代词作主语时，谓语动词用复数形式，不受‘就近原则'的限制．如，Both Li Ming and Wei Hua are good at English．
③right？对吧？加上问号表示反问．

解答 Hi Anna，
I'm Liu Lin．I'm a student of Yuying Middle School in China．I'm kind of outgoing and good at swimming．（高分句型）（介绍自己）I'd like to be your friend．Because of the same age，I think we can learn well from each other and help each other．（高分句型）It's also a good way for us to talk both in English and Chinese，right？（高分句型）And I think we can know a lot about your and my country and people．（为什么）Is that what you expect？Best wishes!
Yours，Liu Lin

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯