题目内容
2.足够的睡眠时间对学生来讲很重要,然而调查显示,许多学生睡眠不足.请根据图示内容,简要指出学生睡眠不足的原因并提出建议.要求:
1.要点齐全,并适当发挥:
2.词数:80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称.
It's important for students to have enough sleeping time.However,many of them don't have enough time to sleep.
There are different reasons for it.Some students often spend too much time on
computer games so that they don't go to bed early.Some students have bad sleeping habits.They often drink too much tea or coffee before going to bed.This makes them too excited to fall asleep.
In order to get enough sleep,we should keep away from computer games.We shouldn't
stay up too late.What's more,we can drink hot milk instead of coffee or listen to soft
music before we go to bed,which can help us have a sound sleep.
In a word,if we make good use of time and form good habits,we'll have enough sleepig time.Then we'll be happier and healthier..
分析 解答本题时需要注意:足够的睡眠时间对学生来讲很重要,写作时要重点指出学生睡眠不足的原因,叙述这些内容的时候句子的时态必须用一般现在时,主语是第三人称;最后提出建议的句子应该用一般将来时,表示学生今后应该如何做的事情.
解答 It's important for students to have enough sleeping time.However,many of them don't have enough time to sleep.
There are different reasons for it.Some students often spend too much time on computer games so that they don't go to bed early.Some students have bad sleeping habits.They often drink too much tea or coffee before going to bed.This makes them too excited to fall asleep.
In order to get enough sleep,we should keep away from computer games.We shouldn't stay up too late.What's more,we can drink hot milk instead of coffee or listen to soft music before we go to bed,which can help us have a sound sleep.
In a word,if we make good use of time and form good habits,we'll have enough sleepig time.Then we'll be happier and healthier.
点评 本篇是一篇以提纲提供情景的作文.写作的关键是要抓住文章的中心内容来写,把学生睡眠不足的原因写清楚并提出建议.写作时,要先确定好时态,再注意谓语动词形式的变化.另外,还需要使用一些句型和短语,使整篇短文意思连贯,表达流畅.在作文完成的时候,应该检查、修改,以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节.
| A. | paint | B. | painted | C. | were painting | D. | were painted |