Question

书面表达(15分)

请以“My happy ”为题写一篇关于描述人、物或事件的英语短文。

要求：1. 先把题目补充完整 (空格处可以是单词、短语，也可以是从句)；

2．短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息；

3．词数80左右。

My happy _________

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My happy day

Last Sunday evening, I went to City Cinema to see a film named Let The Bullets Fly[让子弹飞] after I finished all my homework. When I got there, the film would begin. Suddenly, I found a little girl crying on the corner outside the cinema. I went there and asked him why he was crying. He didn’t tell me until a few minutes. He got lost and couldn’t find his mother when the last film was over. I helped find his mother at once. An hour had passed, but I couldn’t find the boy’s mother. I had to call the police. When we got to the police station, the boy’s mother was waiting there. How happy they were! When I got to the cinema, the film had already been over. Though I couldn’t see the film, I still felt happy because I helped a lost boy.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以My happy_____为题写一篇作文。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，关于人、事件的，和某人相处某事的的快乐时光；提纲虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者讲述了自己的时间都花费在哪了，层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如I helped find his mother at once.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如Suddenly, I found a little girl crying on the corner outside the cinema. I went there and asked him why he was crying. How happy they were! 等。

考点：提纲类作文。