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4．请仔细阅读上图，对90后学生普遍具备的优点进行阐述（至少3点），可适当发挥（例如：We are usually fair．We always treat others equally．）．另外，作为一名90后学生，请结合你自己和周围同学的表现，列举至少2点不足之处进行描述．最后，请根据你自己的感悟，对即将开始初中生活的新生提出你的建议．
具体要求：
1?内容包括至少3个优点、2个不足之处和1个建议，可适当发挥．
2?括号内所给例句不得使用．
3?不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数．
4?语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整．
5?文中不得出现真实校名及姓名．
As post?90s students，we have so many advantages．
We are usually kind and helpful．When someone is in trouble，we always give him or her a hand．We are also energetic．We like to do sports and gotraveling．Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after class．In addition，we are obviously imaginative，We always try something new and do everything differently．On the other hand，we also have some disadvantages．To tell you the truth，some of us are a little impolite．Sometimes we can't express our opinions in a correct way．We are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives．Overall，as past-90s students who will enter a middle school，I think you need to get used to school life，as quickly as you can．You should work hard every day and take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve your abilities．Boys and girls，the future is up to us to create．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
We are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives．
so…that从句：如此…以至于…
【高分句型二】
Overall，as past-90s students ①who will enter a middle school，I think②you need to③get used to school life，④as quickly as you can．
①who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰前面的 past-90s students．
②think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
③get used to 习惯于
④as…as sb can尽可能的…

解答 As post?90s students，we have so many advantages．We are usually kind and helpful．When someone is in trouble，we always give him or her a hand．We are also energetic．We like to do sports and go traveling．Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after class．In addition，we are obviously imaginative，We always try something new and do everything differently．（优点）On the other hand，we also have some disadvantages．To tell you the truth，some of us are a little impolite．Sometimes we can't express our opinions in a correct way．We are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives．【高分句型一】（不足之处）Overall，as past-90s students who will enter a middle school，I think you need to get used to school life，as quickly as you can．【高分句型二】You should work hard every day and take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve your abilities．Boys and girls，the future is up to us to create．（建议）

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