Question

【题目】深圳是一座美丽的现代化城市。请根据下面的要点提示，写一篇80词左右的短文介 绍这座城市。要求包含所有要点，适当发挥，语句通顺，书写整洁。

要点如下：

1.深圳有很多主题公园，例如欢乐谷（The Happy Valley)、世界之窗（Window of the World）等；

2. 深圳有漂亮的海景，人们可以去海里游泳；

3. 深圳逛街的地方很多，还有很多美味的食物。

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Answer 1

【答案】Shenzhen is a beautiful and modern city in South China. A lot of people come here for work, shopping and sightseeing every year. There are many theme parks in Shenzhen, such as the Happy Valley, Window of the World and so on. People can enjoy themselves in these theme parks. Visitors can also enjoy the beautiful sea around Shenzhen, and it is great fun to swim

in the sea. There are many places for shopping in Shenzhen, and the visitors can buy almost anything they want. They can also enjoy all kinds of delicious food here. Welcome to Shenzhen!

【解析】本文是一篇给材料作文，根据要点提示用英文介绍深圳这座美丽的现代化城市。由于是城市介绍，因此时态运用一般现在时态，人称为第三人称。写作中会用到There be句型，要注意句子的主语的变化及主谓一致的问题。多种句式的交替使用，会增加文章的亮点，连词的合理使用，会使文章更顺畅。