Question

11．假设你班为了配合创建"文明城市"，最近以""为题进行了讨论，请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇短文，向其他人介绍你班讨论的结果．

Title	Better City，Better Life
In the future	Better environment      happier life Live longer             less pollution
What should we do now？	Protect the environment     obey the traffic rules Be more friendly           take more exercise
Yourself	What should I do now？

要求：
1．文章必须包括所提供的主要信息，可作适当发挥
2．字数：90词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）．
Better City，Better Life
Our city will become more and more beautiful in the future．                                         

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's our duty to keep our city clean and tidy让我们的城市干净整洁是我们的职责．
it's one's duty to do sth做某事是某人的职责．
【高分句型二】
To stay healthy，we ought to take more exercise为了保持健康我们应该更多的锻炼．
动词不定式做目的状语．

解答 Better City，Better Life
Our city will become more and more beautiful in the future．The environment will be better，and people's lives will be happier than before．There will be less pollution in our city，people can live longer than before，too．（未来）As students，we should stop anyone from polluting the environment．It's our duty to keep our city clean and tidy．【高分句型一】We should obey the traffic rules．People should be more friendly with each other．To stay healthy，we ought to take more exercise【高分句型二】（应该怎么做）．I think I can talk with my friends about what to do and I will ask my family members to join us in protecting environment．So let's take action from now on so that we can reach our aim"Better City，Better Life"（我应该怎么做）

点评 写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合文章要表达的主题，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．