Question

【题目】书面表达

在你们成长的道路上，总有一些事让你铭记心间，请以An unforgetful experience为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，在你的故事中，讲述以下情况，注意语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺。

要求: 1.What happened ?

2.When did it happen ?

3.Where did it happen ?

4.How did it make you feel ?Why?

5.What did you learn from the experience?

Answer 1

【答案】

An unforgettable experience

There are an art festival is our school. Last Friday I performed a program badly in front of a big group of students. I had practiced it many times. But I was too nervous to preform well. It made me sad when I walked back. I told it about my father. He told me that I should learn from my mistakes .They could help me achieve my dreams. I knew my father love me.

【解析】

试题分析：本文应可以用第一人称，时态主要使用一般过去时态。作者灵活采用不同的表达方式将事件完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：本文叙述条理清晰，行文流畅。语言丰富，句式多样。如：in front of ,learn from, walked back等；恰当地使用了宾语从句等，使文章内容更加衔接，一气呵成，效果不错。