Question

假设下面是你的笔友Peter的一些信息。请根据下面内容，写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况。

要求：① 语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥。

② 词数80字左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

1. 年龄及外貌：出生于1997年8月23号，圆脸，长鼻，戴一副眼镜.

2. 饮食：健康，常吃水果蔬菜，很少吃垃圾食品.

3．性格：慷慨大方，乐于助人(举一例)……。

4．品质：善良，善待动物。

5．梦想之家：远离城市，靠近大海。

I am very glad to introduce my pen friend Peter to you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is my pen friend，what about yours?

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

I am very glad to introduce my pen friend Peter to you.

He was born on August 23 1997. He has a round face and a long nose. He wears a pair of glasses because of working on the computer too much at night. He is strong and healthy. Every day he eats much fruit and many vegetables. What’s more, he seldom eats junk food. He is generous and helpful. He often gives his seats to people in need on the bus. He is also kind. He always treats animals kindly. His dream home is far away from the city. It’s close to the sea.

This is my pen friend , what about yours?

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达应根据提纲内容介绍笔友的年龄外貌性格品质，饮食及梦想。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，准确运用时态。文章衔接连贯，运用了because of，what’s more等连词进行衔接。同时，本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:in need, far away from, close to等。

考点：提纲作文。