Question

书面表达。(共一题，计10分)

请以My best friend为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，内容提示如下。

我最好的朋友叫Li Ming；

他戴小而圆的眼镜，幽默，有耐心，他还……；

在混合学校学习，是个尖子生，最擅长英语，可以与外国朋友聊天，可以读英文报纸和书籍；

非常痴迷自己动手做东西，曾自己制作卡片作为生日礼物送给他的妈妈。

注意：

短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

第2要点的内容须用1-2句展开合理想象，作适当发挥；

标题和第一要点已给出，不计入总词数。

My best friend

My best friend is Li Ming.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My best friend

My best friend is Li Ming. He wears small round glasses. He is humorous and patient. He is also helpful. He often gives his seat on the bus to someone in need. He studies in a mixed school. He is a top student. He is good at English. He can chat with foreign friends and he can read English newspapers and books. He is crazy about “DIY”. Once he made his mother a card by himself as a birthday present. It made his mother very happy.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是材料作文，考生在写作之前必须认真审题，把握写作要求和写作目的。本文要求写一篇短文，介绍自己最好的朋友Max。应该用第三人称做主语。时态是一般现在时。写作前写出有关的短语和固定表达备用。

【亮点说明】本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。还恰当地运用了些短语和句式，如He can chat with foreign friends and he can read English newspapers；He is crazy about “DIY”.等为文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。