题目内容
书面表达(满分20分)
假设你是Han Mei,针对初三这一年的学习生活,结合自己的理想,谈谈在饮食、健康、学习等方面自己的打算,并给家长或老师写一封信,谈谈自己应该被允许和不被允许做的事情,并阐明理由。词数80个左右 。在写作过程中,不能出现你所在班级及你的真实姓名。
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Dear dad,
It seems that I’m very busy this year because we are going to take the entrance exam to high school. I think I should be allowed to eat snacks during the break because I always get hungry near noon. I should be allowed to eat junk food every day, because it’s delicious and I really like it. I should be allowed to play soccer after school. It’s good for my health too. I want to be a computer programmer when i grow up. so I should be allowed to join a computer club on weekends. besides I think I am old enough to get a driver’s license. I want to drive my car to school every day.
yours ever
Han Mei
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇命题作文,写一写自己打算。由于在要点中只给出了写作的大致方向,需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料,确定时态主要词汇等问题。根据要求可知本句主要是一般现在及过去时态,人称是第一人称。写作中,应注意描述的全面性;语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底扎实。如so I should be allowed to join a computer club on weekends.等,always等使文章的表达更丰富,更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
考点:命题作文。