Question

随着年龄的增长，我们所学知识的广度在扩大，深度在加深，作业量也会增大。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以Our homework为题举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。

	作业	影响
以 前	1.作业量少； 2.题目容易	有时间进行自己的爱好、……
现 在	1. 作业量大； 2. 题目较难；	没有充足的时间进行自己的爱好、……
我认为……

要 求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

3）词数：100词左右（正文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

Our homework

As we grow, what we learn is more and more difficult and we have more and more homework.

In the past, we

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Our homework

As we grow, what we learn is more and more difficult and we have more and more homework.

In the past, we had a little homework and it was easy. we had much time for my hobbies and we could sleep well.

However, at present we have too much homework to do. It is also very hard and takes us too much time. we don’t have enough time for our hobbies and sleep. we often feel tired in class.

In my opinion, homework is very useful for us to practice what we are learning. I will plan my time more carefully so that I can finish my homework on time and have enough time to sleep. At the same time, I can have some time for one of my hobbies one day.

【解析】

试题分析：本作文题目是提纲式作文，要求写一篇正文，内容是以前和现在的作业差别以及对我们的影响，另外要表述一下个人观点。题中要求，所给内容必须全部包含在内，还需要适当的发挥。文章整体要分为大部分，过去的作业，现在的作业和个人观点。要注意时态的准确运用，以及文章结构的把握。侧重点要突出。最后的个人观点是关键。

【亮点说明】例文内容简练明了，层次分明，用词准确，上下连贯。在表达出所给内容之外，还进行了自己的补充。时态准确，描述过去作业的时候用了一般过去时。在描述个人观点的时候，更加客观积极向上，从个人计划上来阐述解决作业量增多的解决办法。另外，文章用到了一些所学短语，比如，比较级 and 比较级，in my opinion,等等，使文章更加有层次。

考点：提纲式作文。