Question

【题目】书面表达

学校将在下周举行英文演讲比赛，Jack的话题是 “对我影响最深的人”，请根据以下材料，帮他组织一篇100字左右英文演讲稿，介绍一下三位对他影响最深的人，并说说你的感想.

Persons	Job	Details
My mother	a teacher	1. forties; 2. full of love（至少举一例说明）; 3. decide to donate her body after her death
Tan Dun	a composer	1. born in Hunan, China； 2. help build a bridge between the East and the West; 3. bring Chinese and Western music together;
Jackie Chan	a film star	1. nearly 100 films, join humour and exciting action together 2. win many awards; 3. spend many years doing charity work;

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. There are three persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

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Answer 1

【答案】

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. There are three persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

My mother is a teacher. She is in her forties. She has a heart full of love and she has donated blood many times. To my surprise, she has decided to donate her body after her death.

Tan Dun is a composer. He was born in Hunan, China. He has helped build a bridge between the East and the West. He has successfully brought Chinese and Western music together.

Jackie Chan is a film star. He has acted in nearly 100 films, In the films, he joined humour and exciting action together perfectly. He has won many awards. He is also a humanitarian. He has spent many years doing charity work. He is thought highly of by many people.

They are all my heroes. They are really worth learning from.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。