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书面表达（10分）

请根据以下提示，完成短文。题目“我的理想学校。”词数80左右。

起床晚，所以希望上学晚，放学早。有很多的空余时间。

学校餐厅大而亮。可以在那里吃饭和聊天。

每天都上电脑课。每人一台电脑，可以玩游戏。

有藏书丰富的图书馆，网球场和游泳池。

作业少，课外活动少。周么不用做作业。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My ideal school

I get up late, so I hope I can go to school late and school finishes early. I want to have more free time to play games. There is a big and bright dining hall in our school. We can eat and chat there. We can have Computer Studies every day. Everyone has one computer to play computer games. My ideal school has a library with lots of library books, it also has a tennis court and a swimming pool. We want to have less homework and more after-school activities. It is better that we do not have to do any homework at weekends.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用提纲的给材料作文。要求介绍自己的理想学校，所给的材料非常的详细，我们在写作中要合理安排，使描述更通顺，更有条理。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，如：It is better that…,等。

考点：提纲作文。