Question

【题目】书面表达。

假设你的名字叫李明，下面是你一天的主要活动，请以My Day为题，根据提示向大家介绍你的活动，可适当发挥。词数50词左右，要求语句通顺，有条理性。

get up	go to school	Have classes	do homework	go to bed
7:00 a．m．	7:30 a．m．	8:30 a.m．	6:30 p．m．	8:30 p．m．

Answer 1

【答案】My Day

My name is Li Ming. I’m a student. I have a busy day. I get up at seven o’clock and get dressed at five past seven in the morning. Then I have breakfast. I go to school at seven thirty and I get to school at eight o’clock. At half past eight we have our classes. Every day we have six classes.

After school I go home. I do my homework at six thirty. I go to bed at eight thirty in the evening.

This is my day. What about you?

【解析】本文属于材料作文，介绍我一天的生活。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如busy，get dressed, at half past eight以及What about you。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。