Question

5．A  My _________ Rules把题目补充完成并写一篇短文．
B 星期天你和你的朋友们去动物园玩，动物园里有许多动物，人们在做着不同的事情，请以 A visit to zoo 为题写一篇短文
要求：1、不少于60字的短文，分值相同．
2、注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范．
3、不得使用真实姓名，否则以零分计算．如需使用姓名，请以Mike，Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Xinhua Middle school．

Answer 1

分析 A篇：【高分句型一】
I like some rules because they are helpful我喜欢一些规则因为他们有用．
because引导的原因状语从句．
【高分句型二】
Besides，helping mother do chores makes her happy另外，帮助妈妈做家务能让她开心．
动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数．
B篇：【高分句型一】
How crowed the zoo was!动物园多么热闹啊！
how+adj+主语+谓语！感叹句的使用
【高分句型二】
We had a good time today!我们玩的多开心啊
have a good day玩的开心．

解答 My Family Rules
There are many rules in my family．
I like some rules because they are helpful．【高分句型一】For example，I have to clean my bedroom every day．I think it's a good rule．On the one hand，children should be educated to take care of ourselves from a young age．On the other hand，it is comfortable and relaxing for us to sleep in a clean bedroom．Besides，helping mother do chores makes her happy（喜欢的规则）．【高分句型二】
However，there are some terrible rules which make me unhappy．One of them is that I can't have my own hobbies．In my opinion，I think parents should support their children's dreams．That's because dreams can make children work hard and full of energy．What's more，I am not allowed to watch TV before finishing my homework on weekdays．I know we students feel tired after a day's study．I think parents should allow us to watch TV for a while when we get home．This can help us relax ourselves and it is also easier for us to pay attention to our homework．（不喜欢的规则）
All in all．my parents make these rules to help me be better，but some of my family rules are too strict．I think they should be changed！

A trip to the zoo 
It was a fine day and the sun was bright．I visited the WenZhou zoo with my family．（天气和游玩地点和人物）
We started at nine．After an hour we went to the zoo by bus．How crowed the zoo was!：【高分句型一】We could see students．villagers，workers and so on everywhere．Most of them were young parents with their children．（看到的人）
There are hundreds of different kinds of animals in it，Elephants，bears，lions，monkeys and beautiful birds．Among them monkeys were children's favourits．They jumped up and down，begged for food and ate something in the corner．Sometimes they even made faces．The elephants had big noses and big ears and they were kind to people．Pandas with good manners，were very friendly and polite to visitors．（描述动物）
We had a good time today!【高分句型二】

点评 注意题目要求，注意紧扣文章主题，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、词组及句型，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．