Question

书面表达

假如你们学校要开展“创建和谐校园(to build a harmonious campus)”活动，请根据提示写一篇倡议书，号召大家为创建和谐校园而努力。词数：100词左右。(短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)

要点提示：

1．努力学习，参加课外活动；

2．有爱互助，尊敬师长；

3．爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔废弃物。

Our school is like our home．We should try to build up a harmonious campus．________________________________

Answer 1

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解析：

Our school is like our home．We should try to build up a harmonious campus． 　　First of all, we should work hard at our lessons．After school, we had better take an active part in all kinds of school activities to help improve our health and study． 　　Then we should be friendly to one another．We should respect our teachers and get on well with our classmates． 　　Thirdly, it is our duty to keep the school yard clean and tidy．We shouldn't throw wastes around or pick flowers． 　　Please do your best to make our school more and more beautiful． 　　评分说明： 　　要求考生用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准确地表述所提示的内容，书写工整。分四档评分： 　　1、短文通顺完整，表达清楚, 语言基本无误，12－15分; 　　2、短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误，8－11分; 　　3、能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但尚能达意，4－7分; 　　4、仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言错误多，影响意思表达，0－3分。