Question

书面表达（满分20分）将短文写在答题卷指定的区域内。

你班计划举行一次以“The best present”为话题的英文主题班会课，老师要求每位同学写一篇短文，分享各自心目中的“最好礼物”，内容包括以下几个方面：

·你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么；

·礼物背后的小故事；

·该礼物的意义或启示。

The best present

What's the best present in my eyes?

 

 

 

注意：1．词数80。短文要点表达不分先后，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数：

2．短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名和人名。

 

Answer 1

What’s the best presents in my eyes? It’s a hand-made calendar.

My best friend Jane gave it to me on my 14th birthday. Jane made it by herself. On each page of the calender, there’s a picture of Jane and me with some words. She eirher encourages me or tells me how she feels about our friendship .Whatever I look at the calendar .I’m touched by something warm .

This present is a memory of the wonderful time we spend together . I will keep this special gift forever.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Jane made it by herself. On each page of the calender, there’s a picture of Jane and me with some words. She eirher encourages me or tells me how she feels about our friendship .Whatever I look at the calendar .I’m touched by something warm .等.

考点：话题作文