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书面表达：请根据下面的提示完成一篇作文。

同学们，今年我是遂宁中学八年级的一名学生，我的名字是李刚，我住在乡下，作为一名中学生，我有很多好习惯。比如，我能坚持每天锻炼身体。我总是把空余花时间花在读书上。在学习，我也能去得较好的成绩。我也能做到每天吃水果。我一周要喝两次喝牛奶。我也从不熬夜。但是我也有一些不好的习惯。比如我总是每天要看两个小时的电视。我一周两次也好上两次网。而且我几乎从不帮忙做家务。我也从不去看牙医。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Hello，everyone. I am a student of Grade Eight in Suining middle school. My name is li Gang, I live in the countryside. As a middle school student, I have a lot of good habit. For example, I can insist on taking physical exercise every day. I always spend my spare time in reading. On learning, I also can get good grades. I also eat fruit every day. I drink milk two times a week. I never stay up late. But I also have some bad habits. For example, I always watch TV for two hours every day. I surf the internet twice a week. And I almost never help with the housework. I never go to the dentist either.

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试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注意将所提示内容的情况介绍清楚。根据材料可知，本文主要用一般现在时态，第一人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。

【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：for example，例如；insist on doing sth坚持做某事；spend……doing花费……做某事；stay up熬夜；help with帮助某人做某事。所以在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：考查提纲类作文