题目内容
6.假设你是杨亮,你的美国朋友Dale 想通过你了解中国的传统节日,请你根据提示,给Dale发一封E-mail,向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况.(80词左右)内容提示:(1)春节是中国最重要的传统节日.
(2)春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间)
(3)参考词汇:
Spring Festival,traditional,decorate (装饰),on the eve of the festival,get together,set off fireworks (燃放烟花爆竹),lucky money (压岁钱)
分析 春节是我们比较熟悉的一个节日,它也是中国最重要的一个节日.关于春节的话题是学生们非常熟悉的,所以在写这篇作文的时候,学生们都是有话可说的.但是写的时候,我们要注意表达的顺序,要有条理.根据题目的要求我们知道,这篇短文中应该主要包括以下内容:庆祝春节的时间、怎样庆祝、吃什么、做什么、为什么喜欢春节等,我们要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来.这样就会涉及一些词语用英语的表达问题,如吃饺子eat dumplings;放鞭炮,set off fireworks;给压岁钱lucky money等.另外我们还需要注意使用好的句型,使文章表达流畅,意思连贯.
高分句型:
①You asked me something about the traditional Chinese festival-the Spring Festival.你问我关于中国传统节日春节的情况,这里ask后面跟的应该是一个宾语从句.
②When they meet their neighbors or friends,they'll say;"Happy New Year!''当他们遇到邻居或朋友时,他们会说:"新年快乐!"句子中when引导一个时间状语从句.
解答 Dear Dale,
How are you?You asked me something about the traditional Chinese festival-the Spring Festival(高分句型)(引出话题).Actually,the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China(春节是中国最重要的传统节日.).It is on January 1st according to the Chinese lunar calendar.Chinese New Year is celebrated by eating dumplings,setting off firecrackers,visiting friends and relatives to exchange New Year greetings and hanging red lanterns.On New Year Eve,each family will gather together eating,talking and watching TV for almost the whole night.The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from their parents orgrand-parents.When they meet their neighbors or friends,they'll say;"Happy New Year!''(高分句型)(春节期间人们的主要活动)
Yours,
Yang Liang
点评 这是一篇优秀的作文.作者详细的给我们介绍了中国的传统节日-春节.首先作者先告诉Mary,春节是中国最重要的节日,the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China,这是一个主题句.然后作者从春节的时间、庆祝的方式等方面做了介绍,这一部分是文章的中心部分,使用了很多比较好的句型,如Chinese New Year is celebrated by eating dumplings,setting off firecrackers,visiting friends and relatives to exchange New Year greetings and hanging red lanterns.,这一句话中使用了几个并列的短语,告诉了我们中国人庆祝春节的方式,被动语态的使用,介词by后跟动名词,用得都很准确.下面是关于春节的一些习俗,如The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from their parents or grand-parents.When they meet their neighbors or friends,they'll say;"Happy New Year!''
| 运动的重要性 | 运动的时间与方式 |
| •保持健康 •培养个人的性格 … | •上学时步行或骑自行车 •体育课做各种锻炼 •课外活动(跑步,打篮球…) •周末与朋友去爬山、游泳等… |
要求:◆词数:80个左右.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;
◆书写工整,拼写、语法正确,内容层次分明.
◆全文中不要提及真实的校名和人名.
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58.It doesn't often rain in the desertall year round.
59.My teacherwas angry with me because I was late for school again.
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| Looks | short,has long hair |
| Favorite food | potatoes and fish |
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| Activities last weekend | visit a friend |
| Activities last vacation | go to the mountains … |
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