Question

Writing(本题共15分，A题5分，B题10分)

（A）文明礼貌是中华民族的传统美德，但是在校园里在我们的身边经常会看到一些不文明的行为，作为中学生你认为什么样的行为是文明的行为，请用五句话概括文明的行为。

Being Polite Students

 

(B)现在在我们国家有很多的传统节日，请以My favourite festival 为题写一篇短文。

要求：1.词数80—100词

2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

As a middle school student, politeness is our compulsory lessons everyday, so, how to be polite? I think we should

do the following

1, to see the elders should say hello.

2, enter the room before knocking at the door.

3, in the home not to speak loudly.

4, when the guests come should say hello, when guests leave should say goodbye.

5, don't be late for school, should finish the homework on time.

If we can do all of the above, I think, we are a polite people

(B)

My favorite festival

My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. Why? Because I have lots of fun at the Spring Festival.

The Spring Festival is a popular holiday in our country. It is in January or February. Our family get together. We have a big dinner at my grandparents’ home. I always eat a lot of delicious food. My cousin and I both get red packets from our grandparents. My parents usually go shopping with me. We buy some nice clothes for ourselves. We often watch TV at home and sometimes read books or surf the Internet. Sometimes, we greet other people on the phone.I’m always happy at the Spring Festival.

【解析】

试题分析：这两篇都是话题作文，所给提示简洁明了，要求明确，话题内容贴近学生学习实际，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态以及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这两篇短文能够根据写作提示，较好地把与写作相关的内容进行归纳整合，要点全面，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑；同时，灵活使用多种句式，使文章脉络清晰，层次鲜明。此外，文章中还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。在平时的学习中注意加强练笔，掌握一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。