Question

【题目】书面表达

要点：大卫是我的同班同学，他十三岁，来自南京，他又高又强壮，他喜欢篮球，是篮球俱乐部成员之一，放学后常和我打篮球，他经常在电视上看篮球比赛，他最喜欢的篮球运动员是姚明。他也喜欢读书，我和他经常去学校图书馆，图书馆里有许多有趣的书。(70个词左右)

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Answer 1

【答案】David is my classmate. He is 13 years old. He comes from Nanjing. He is tall and strong. He likes playing basketball and he is one of the basketball club members. He often plays basketball with me after school. He often watches basketball games on TV. His favorite basketball player is Yao Ming. He likes reading, too. He is my good friend. He often goes to the school library with me. There are many interesting books in the library.

【解析】

本文是材料作文。首先认真审题和阅读提示,确定时态和人称。根据提示和内容可知此文时态是一般现在时，人称是第三人称。动笔前要认真阅读提示，列好提纲，根据提纲写作文。内容要包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥。不要写得太少，字数在70词以上。要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。

（一）根据要点列提纲：（1）大卫是我的同班同学。David is my classmate.（2）他十三岁了。He is 13 years old.（2）他来自南京。He comes/is from Nanjing.（3）他又高又强壮。He is tall and strong.（4）他喜欢篮球，是篮球俱乐部成员之一。He likes playing basketball and he is one of the basketball club members.（5）放学后常和我打篮球。He often plays basketball with me after school.他经常在电视上看篮球比赛。He often watches basketball games on TV.他最喜欢的篮球运动员是姚明。His favorite basketball player is Yao Ming.（6）他也喜欢读书。He likes reading, too.我和他经常去学校图书馆。I often goes to the school library with me.（7）图书馆里有许多有趣的书。There are many interesting books in the library.（三）写完以后再阅读一遍，检查是否有语法、单词拼写等错误，或不合适的地方。