Question

7．中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼．假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法．

你的烦恼	你的做法
个头不高，相貌平常	不必在意，相信自己
父母不理解，朋友少	学会沟通，友善待人
学习压力大，课外活动少	…（自主发挥，至少两点）

要求：1．词数100左右．开头及结尾已给出，不计人总词数．
2．所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥．
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息．A．B．C．D．

Hello everyone，
I am Li Hua．I'd like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them．
．I am not very tall and very common．But I don't care and I believe in myself．
My parents don't understand me and I have very few friends．I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well．
I often feel stressed because of my study and I don't have many chances to join the after-class activities．I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way．Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．你的烦恼；个头不高，相貌平常，父母不理解，朋友少，学习压力大，课外活动少
2．你的做法；不必在意，相信自己，学会沟通，友善待人…（自拟两点）

常用到的重点短语：
encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
communicate with sb 与某人交流
because of 因为
try to do sth 尽力做某事
believe in 相信
【高分句型】
1．I ①encourage myself to②be kind to others and ③learn to ④communicate with others very well．
①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
②be kind to sb 对某人友好
③learn to do sth 学会做某事
④communicate with sb 与某人交流
2．I often feel stressed①because of my study and I don't have many chances②to join the after-class activities．
①because of 因为．of是介词后加名词代词动名词．
②动词不定式做目的状语．
3．Try to join ①as many activities as possible and achieve a balance②between study and hobbies．
①as…as possible 尽可能…
②between …and…两者之间

解答 Hello everyone，
I am Li Hua．I'd like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them．I am not very tall and very common．But I don't care and I believe in myself．（个头不高，相貌平常--不必在意，相信自己）
My parents don't understand me and I have very few friends．I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well．【高分句型】（父母不理解，朋友少--学会沟通，友善待人）
I often feel stressed because of my study and I don't have many chances to join the after-class activities．【高分句型】I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way．Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies．【高分句型】（学习压力大，课外活动少-注意学习方法，多参加课外活动）
That's all．Thank you!

点评 这是一篇图表作文．是谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法，时态比较单一，考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯