Question

12．请你以"A trip to…"为题写一篇短文，介绍自己印象最深的一次旅游．文章需涉及到以下信息：when，where，who，what you saw，what you did and your feeling．
注意：1、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
    2、语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
    3、词数80左右．
A trip to                                                   ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous theme park我们在一家著名的主题公园玩得很开心．
enjoy oneself玩得开心
【高分句型二】
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring，but we really had a fantastic time there我去三亚的旅行似乎短暂疲劳，但是我们真的在那里玩得开心，
but表示转折．

解答 Last month，I went on a trip to Sanya，Hainan．（时间地点）I went there by train with my parents．（任务）It took about 12 hours to get there．
On the first day，we walked around the city．It was quite a beautiful place．The sky was blue and the air was nice and clean．We all enjoyed the beautiful views．People there were friendly too．
On the second day，we visited one of the most famous beaches and some museums．Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous theme park．【高分句型一】
We did some shopping on the third day．Mum and I bought a lot of things．After that，we had a big dinner in a seafood restaurant．
（经过）
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring，but we really had a fantastic time there【高分句型二】．（感觉）

点评 写作时要注意一些几点：
（1）应抓住文章中心，围绕主题，根据提示列出要写的信息要点．
（2）注意内容是否充实、积极和健康．
（3）注意文章的结构层次，要凸显文章的主题．
（4）要注意语言规范，表达准确，选材造句都尽量使用学过、见过的语言材料．