Question

12．目前中学生早餐问题已经引起社会关注，你所在学校针对这一问题开展问卷调查，其结果令人担忧．请你根据调查结果写一篇短文，倡导营养早餐．

类型	早餐情况	健康状况	你的建议
A	每天吃早餐	身体健康，…
B	吃垃圾食品	营养不均衡，…
C	不吃早餐	…

提示词：1．所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并发表自己的看法．
2．可根据表格内容和提示词进行适当发挥．
3．字数100词左右．文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Breakfast Is Important
Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its importance．Here's the result of our survey．Most students have breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active．Some of them just have junk food instead．They don't have a balanced diet．It is bad for their health．A few students go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often feel hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully．What's worse，they get ill easily．
It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是汇报中学生早餐情况的调查结果．倡导营养早餐．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．大部分学生每天吃早餐 身体健康，…
2．一些同学 吃垃圾食品 营养不均衡，…
3．少数同学 不吃早餐 …
4．我的建议
常用到的重点短语：
keep healthy 保持健康
junk food 垃圾食品
be bad for 对…不利
what's worse 更糟糕的是、
as a result  作为结果
【高分句型】
1．Some of them just have junk food instead．
instead表示代替，常放句末．
2．What's worse，they get ill easily．
what's worse 更糟糕的是，插入语．
3．It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

解答 Breakfast Is Important
 Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its importance．Here's the result of our survey．Most students have breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active．（大部分学生每天吃早餐 身体健康）Some of them just have junk food instead．【高分句型】They don't have a balanced diet．It is bad for their health．（一些同学 吃垃圾食品 营养不均衡）A few students go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often feel hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully．What's worse，they get ill easily．【高分句型】（少数同学 不吃早餐 饥饿不能专心听课，易生病）
    It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．【高分句型】（我的建议）

点评 本题是围绕早饭问题展开叙述，首先应该说明吃早饭的重要性，然后，指出一些不健康的饮食习惯．最后，要发出倡议，号召大家坚持吃早饭．在写作时，本文的主语可以用第三人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时．应该尽量包括文中提示的内容，可稍加拓展．应该注意表述的逻辑性和条理性．尽量用简单的语言来表述．