Question

初中的学习生涯即将结束了。三年来，在你获取知识的同时，你的外貌，兴趣爱好，习惯…都有了一定的改变吧！请你以“How I’ve Changed”为题，写一篇短文，告诉我们你的变化好吗？

要求：1. 短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。

2. 60~80词。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

How I’ve Changed

My life has changed a lot in the past three years. I was fat and short when I came to the middle school. At that time I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it. My parents were worried about me. Now, I like sports and I often play football with my classmates after school. So I become taller and stronger than before. I like reading, too. I usually go to the library to read some interesting books. Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提示性作文，主要写初中三年除了在获取知识的同时，在外貌，兴趣爱好，习惯…都有哪些变化。时态主要涉及现在完成时，一般过去时和一般现在时，在写作时，要围绕提示要点展开写作，尽量用一些短语，使作文内容更丰富。

【亮点说明】作者围绕外貌，兴趣爱好，习惯等几方面进行了写作，采用了一般过去时和一般现在时进行对比，使前后变化体现得更明显。文中用了不少短语，in the past three years, be interested in, spend…on, worry about, taller and stronger,keep healthier等，使短文更出彩，这是一篇很不错的作文。

考点：提纲作文。