Question

【题目】书面表达（满分15分）

中学生普遍面临着很多烦恼，请用英语描述下面表格中列出的问题，并提出自己的建议。

烦恼1	整天有做不完的作业，经常熬夜学习，无暇顾及个人爱好；
烦恼2	父母太忙，没有时间陪自己；
烦恼3	几乎没有亲密的朋友可以交流，经常感到孤独；
烦恼4	对自己的体重不满意，不知如何改变；
建议	… …

要求：1、条理清楚，语句通顺；

2、80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Now, many middle school students face some problems.

Answer 1

【答案】

Now, many middle school students face some problems. Many students have too much homework to do. To finish it, they have to stay up late. So they often feel tired and have no spare time for their hobbies. Some students feel lonely because their parents are too busy to stay with them and they don’t have any close friends to talk to. I think they can talk to their parents and teachers about their problems and ask them for help.

Some other students aren’t happy with their weight. To lose weight and keep fit, they need to do more exercise and eat healthy food.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求从几个方面写中学生的烦恼，比如：作业多无暇顾及自己的爱好；父母忙于

工作没时间陪自己：对自己体重不满意：等等…..我们应该在抓住这些要点的基础上再拓展思维，最后

应该提些建议让中学生怎样做去缓解压力，从而使学习成绩提上去。

写作亮点：本文大量运用动词不定式做目的壮语，比如：To finish it；To lose weight and keep fit；还运

用一些常用的词组比如：too…to；talk to ；needto do；and so on…。本文章层次清晰，笔法简洁明快，

把要求及要点都全部展示，是一片较好的文章。