Question

13．根据要点提示以My neighbourhood 为题写一篇短文，词数不少于80词，可适当发挥．
要点：
1．我住在一个美丽安静的小区里，在我们学校以北，小区里大约有一百户家庭，我和父母一起住在一座高楼的第八层．
2．小区四周有很多花和树，这里的空气清新，人们能…
3．小区离市中心不远，乘坐公交车只需半小时到达那里．附近有个动物园，许多游客来那里…
4．小区里的人很友好并互相帮助，一些人经常在周末分享各自的一技之长．
5．…．（用1至2句话发表你对本社区的看法）．
My neighbourhood
                                          

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
There is a zoo near here，and many tourists come here to have a visit附近有一个动物园，很多游客来这游玩．
动词不定式做目的状语．
【高分句型二】
The best thing is my neighbors are very friendly and they help each other最好的事情是我的邻居们都很友好彼此帮助，
省略了that的表语从句，与is构成系表结构．

解答 My Neighborhood 
I'm living in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，and I have been living here for years．It's on the north of my school．There are about 100 families．I live on the eighth floor of a high bilding with my parents．（我住在一个美丽安静的小区里，在我们学校以北，小区里大约有一百户家庭，我和父母一起住在一座高楼的第八层．）There are many trees and flowers near the neighborhood，The air is fresh，people can live more healthily．（小区四周有很多花和树，这里的空气清新，人们能…）I always take a walk in it．It's not far from the center of the city，The bus ride only takes half an hour．There is a zoo near here，and many tourists come here to have a visit．【高分句型一】（小区离市中心不远，乘坐公交车只需半小时到达那里．附近有个动物园，许多游客来那里…）The best thing is my neighbors are very friendly and they help each other．【高分句型二】Some always share their abilities on weekends．（小区里的人很友好并互相帮助，一些人经常在周末分享各自的一技之长）I love my neighborhood very much．（看法）

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