Question

每个人都应该有一种情怀---感恩。我们要感恩生命，感恩生活，感恩父母，感恩社会… 即将要毕业的你，对学习和生活了三年的母校充满了眷念和感恩之情。假如你是善水中学的小月，想在学校举行的演讲比赛中抒发自己的感情，请根据下列信息完成演讲稿。

注意：1. 100词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；

3.不得原句翻译，在必要处作适当发挥。

学校	1.校园环境优美，到处都是花草树木 2. 教学楼、图书馆、操场齐全 3.教室宽敞明亮
老师	1.对待学生有爱心2.丰富的教学经验 3. 对学生既严格又有耐心 4.对待我们像自己的孩子
同学	1. 互相学习、互相关心 2. ……(自拟一点)
感想	1. 心情愉悦，学习优秀 2. ……(自拟两点)

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Our school is the best one in our hometown. The environment is very good: there are many trees and flowers around our school, the air is fresh. We often hear the birds sing .There are new big buildings、a library and a big playground. Our classroom is clean and bright. And especially the condition in our school is advanced.

Our teachers are experienced in teaching. They are strict with us, but when we have difficulty, they are patient enough. They treat us as their own children. How kind they are!

I like my classmates. We learn from and help each other. We share our happiness and sadness with each other, too!

I have spent three years in Shanshui Middle School. I have a great time and I am good at my studies. Sadly, I will leave here soon. But I will never forget my school, my teachers, and my friends. My teachers taught me knowledge; my classmates gave me friendship, my school left me a good memory. Shouldn’t I say thanks to my school, my teachers and my classmates?

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: have a great time玩的开心； We often hear the birds sing . 我们常常听见鸟儿在唱；They treat us as their own children.他们把我们看做他们的孩子等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。