Question

【题目】书面表达

请以“My friend” 为题，根据所给信息完成下面的小短文。 要求：要点齐全，书写工整。省略号部分适当补充. 词数80词左右。

Looks	明亮大眼睛，长长的直发
Personality	慷慨，乐于助人
School life	所有科目中最喜欢法语，觉得学外语其乐无穷
A travel experience	上周，乘飞机到达北京 参观一些名胜古迹，……
A DIY job	痴迷于自己动手做。昨天，她和我一起装饰我的卧室，…… 我们合作得很愉快。

My friend

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Answer 1

【答案】

My friend

Suzy is my friend. She has big bright eyes and long straight hair. She is very generous and ready to help others.

Among all the subjects, she likes French best, she thinks learning foreign languages is fun. In the school, she has lots of time for after- school activities.

Last week,it took her twelve hours to get to Beijing by plane. She visited some places of interest and learn a lot about the culture of China /Chinese culture.

She also likes doing DIY. Yesterday ,she decorated my bedroom with me. We painted the walls blue, put up some beautiful pictures and put in a bright light in my bedroom. We had fun working together.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者主要介绍自己的一个美国朋友的外表、个性、旅行经历等。全文主要用一般现在时态和一般过去时态。

写作亮点：文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如sense of humour，tells jokes, lots of after- school activities.,lplaces of interestast week,learn about,a lot, likes doing,put up had fun working等短语，文中还用到了宾语从句 she thinks learning foreign languages is fun.；固定句型it took her twelve hours to get to Beijing by plane. 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。