Question

书面表达（共1小题，计15分）

随着车辆的增加，城市交通越来越拥挤。假如你叫李敏，前不久和同学们一起讨论了the advantages and disadvantages of using bikes。现在请你根据他们的观点和你自己的观点，给你的外籍老师Susan 写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。

Advantages	Disadvantages	My opinion
Protect the environment	It’s slower than buses and cars
Be good for our health	It’s not suitable for a long trip
It’s cheap

Answer 1

Dear Miss Susan,

I with my classmates discussed the advantages and disadvantages of using bikes not long ago. Let me tell you the results.

Bikes are welcome by the people who love sports. But, with more and more pollutions, especially the air pollution, we should ride bikes more often. First of all, we can reduce the traffic accidents by riding bikes. Secondly, riding bikes can save energy which is becoming less and less. And the third, perhaps, the most important is that riding bikes can help protect our environment. That is why more and more people begin to use their bicycles to work, or to school they like. And they think that it is also a good sport which can make people much more healthy. But it’s slower than buses and cars. It’s not suitable for a long trip. I prefer riding bicycles because it is cheap and keeps the air clean.

That’s all.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较明确，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主语以第三人称，体裁是书信。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如I prefer riding bicycles because it is cheap and keeps the air clean. 我喜欢骑自行车，因为它便宜，保持空气清洁。另外First of all、Secondly、And the third等的使用是的文章非常条理。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

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