Question

【题目】今天是星期天，天气很好，你的澳大利亚朋友要来你家，你将带他参观你所居住的城市，一天会很忙碌，但会玩得很开心。

show…around the city, the center of, some interesting places, shopping mall, presents, have a good time, etc.

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Answer 1

【答案】It’s a fine day today. I’m happy that my friend Jack from Australia will come to visit me. I will show him around the city. We are going to visit some interesting places and I will tell him some interesting stories about the interesting places in English. We will go to the biggest shopping mall in the center of the city and I will help him choose many presents for his friends in Australia. We will have lunch in a Chinese restaurant. I think Jack will enjoy Chinese food a lot. We must be tired today but we will have a good time.

【解析】解析：这是一篇给材料作文，文章用一般现在时态，学生需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；上下文要意思连贯，符合逻辑关系；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

词语提示：show…around the city, the center of, some interesting places, shopping mall, presents, have a good time, etc.